Little details
Jan. 23rd, 2008 11:25 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
shadowArgh! It's the attack of the little details! I was doing some cleanup work on an earlier chapter to my spring FF only to discover that I had five men standing around in a six-mat room with their footwear and things with them. That's *so* not going to be comfortable or unnoticeable. Okay, it's not as bad as Ryokuryou where they gave all the guys a six-mat room to sleep in, but still. Same idea. >.> I wonder if anyone (John) did end up sleeping in the closet during that investigation... :P
Otherwise, I get the feeling I need to re-arrange my FF site. It's starting to look messy and disorganised. *sigh* Something I really didn't want to have to think or worry about right now. >.>
And a little snippet that became unusable in my spring FF. *sigh* I'd really like to use it, but the scene's too serious for it to fit in the way it's standing right now. Why? Why can't I use this?! :P
"I guess this is one of those times when I should reveal another part of myself in order to help pass the time while we wait," Yasuhara said with a mischievous wink at Bou-san.
"No, it's not!" Bou-san yelled as goosebumps broke out over his entire body. "Lin-san, I'm begging you, trade places with me! I'll stay here with John and Naru-bou, *you* go with this guy."
"...Me...?" Lin asked looking surprised.
"Ahahah, that's no good, Norio. Lin-san's needed here, so no running away." Yasuhara laughed.
"I'm Mai's 'father', so it makes more sense for me to stay here," Bou-san said desperately. "You go with the young man, Lin-san. I'll help keep an eye on Mai."
Before Lin could answer however, an arctic chill spread throughout the room as Naru glared at the three of them. "Now's not the time for that sort of stupidity," he said icily. "Get to work."
Oh well. Back to working things out again. :P
Otherwise, I get the feeling I need to re-arrange my FF site. It's starting to look messy and disorganised. *sigh* Something I really didn't want to have to think or worry about right now. >.>
And a little snippet that became unusable in my spring FF. *sigh* I'd really like to use it, but the scene's too serious for it to fit in the way it's standing right now. Why? Why can't I use this?! :P
"I guess this is one of those times when I should reveal another part of myself in order to help pass the time while we wait," Yasuhara said with a mischievous wink at Bou-san.
"No, it's not!" Bou-san yelled as goosebumps broke out over his entire body. "Lin-san, I'm begging you, trade places with me! I'll stay here with John and Naru-bou, *you* go with this guy."
"...Me...?" Lin asked looking surprised.
"Ahahah, that's no good, Norio. Lin-san's needed here, so no running away." Yasuhara laughed.
"I'm Mai's 'father', so it makes more sense for me to stay here," Bou-san said desperately. "You go with the young man, Lin-san. I'll help keep an eye on Mai."
Before Lin could answer however, an arctic chill spread throughout the room as Naru glared at the three of them. "Now's not the time for that sort of stupidity," he said icily. "Get to work."
Oh well. Back to working things out again. :P
