Hmm... I like, I want, but I can't see it happening. ^^;; I also need to work on a transition some more in it. ^^;
At least ST2 knocked. Some just barge on in and say 'write me now!' kthxbai!
It did. It knocked, said "Hi, this is it. Write me down lest you forget." and kept me up until 3:30AM. Then the next morning, it said, "Y'know, that first scene would probably work better if you jumped right into the middle of things? Skip all that long exposition you wrote last night. This works better." >.> I was not impressed, although I admit the latter does work better. *sigh* So, now I have an opening scene with nothing following, and no real idea where it wants to go. ^^;;
Oh well. I have a long way to go before I can get back to that opening. ^^;;
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At least ST2 knocked. Some just barge on in and say 'write me now!' kthxbai!
It did. It knocked, said "Hi, this is it. Write me down lest you forget." and kept me up until 3:30AM. Then the next morning, it said, "Y'know, that first scene would probably work better if you jumped right into the middle of things? Skip all that long exposition you wrote last night. This works better." >.> I was not impressed, although I admit the latter does work better. *sigh* So, now I have an opening scene with nothing following, and no real idea where it wants to go. ^^;;
Oh well. I have a long way to go before I can get back to that opening. ^^;;